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Ode to a Rising youth
Contributed by
missprint
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Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:27:39 PM in AEST
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Can you hear the sound of the rifles?
They are shooting fire
out of your burning hearts
Because you have flames,
burning
Not in your hands,
but in your eyes.
never have I seen souls so pure
and lives more worth living,
than yours.
And I gently brush with grace,
every time I see you smile.
I cant promise you peace
or joy
or love,
but I can give you hope.
So lets open fire
on their faades
Copyright ©
missprint
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2005-12-28 19:27:39]
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Re: Ode to a Rising youth
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 09:41:26 PM AEST
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| nice poem i liked it...............^_^ |
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Re: Ode to a Rising youth
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 10:08:42 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderfull peace man. top class i was hooked right through. exactly the kind of writing i love and dont hear enough. |
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Re: Ode to a Rising youth
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by Channing on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 06:07:30 PM AEST
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Interesting write, I like it.
-Channing- |
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