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poem 1
Contributed by
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 10:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My life,
Is like one endless nightmare.
I've been living,
Breathing,
In Hell.
All my life,.
I close my eyes,
And I can see only one thing.
Satan,
The Devil himself.
And all the flames behind him.
I can feel the heat,
Searing,
And burning my skin.
Raw flesh,
Gaping wounds.
Blood pouring out.
One slash of the knife,
After another.
Endlessly,
Till I'm left,
Bleeding & dying.
But,
Do you care?
Does anyone care?
Am I just another shadow,
OR,
Am I nothing at all?
Who knows.
Satan's got me tied down.
My wrists,
My ankles,
The flesh is being burnt away.
I feel pain.
Nothing but the endless pain.
Taking me down,
Torturing me,
Till I scream.
But no one hears,
No one sees.
My screams go unnoticed,
I go unnoticed.
I can see the gates now.
The fires of Hell,
Burning.
They call,
I go to them.
They wait for me,
Silently as possible.
Never truly feeling the heat,
Until the reach out & grab me.
They haunt me,
Constantly.
Never letting go.
Dragging me by the fingers,
Deeper into Hell.
I silently scream,
I kick & trash,
No one hears,
No one sees.
And again I feel,
Nothing but the endless pain.
Constantly tearing,
At my heart,
At my soul,
At me.
I beg,
"Pain,
Please go away."
Every day,
I beg this plea.
No one hears,
No one sees.
How typical.
The pain is gone now.
I am dead.
I see people,
At my funeral,
Smile at my dead body.
Partying,
And having fun.
Rejoicing,
Now that I'm gone.
But where does my soul end up?
Not Heaven,
But Hell.
That's where it belongs.
Where I belong.
My please go unnoticed.
No one hears,
No one sees.
That's how it's supposed to be,
Right?
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Re: poem 1
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:04:10 PM AEST
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| Wow.. that's long but still very good. I know how you. Anyways great job! |
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Re: poem 1
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:05:14 PM AEST
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| Uh... on my last comment I meant to write "I know how you feel." Sorry |
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Re: poem 1
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 12:28:14 AM AEST
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| very good poem |
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Re: poem 1
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by grim6669 on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 04:09:48 AM AEST
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| i really liked that one... it reminds me of my poem twisted end... you should check it out soon... or whenever |
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Re: poem 1
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by Forgotten_soul on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 01:35:18 PM AEST
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| since i read this, now I must read all your depressing poems, this has truely touched me. I understand this. you are capturing emotion in your poetry. great write. |
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