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Love Unspoken
Contributed by
TheJohnnyGrr
on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 04:08:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Beneath this starlit sky
we search the night for reasons why
to never throw this all away
fearing those words we never say
too affraid to see this end
and the brilliance in your eyes
stare barely focused into mine
while slow breathing breaks the silence
of this all too quiet, dark alliance
and i feel like there is something,
that i know you need to hear
but still i havent said it
cause your still lying next to me
too affraid that if i speak
my words with cause you to leave
so please just stay here next to me
in this silent, nocturnal serenity
Copyright ©
TheJohnnyGrr
... [
2005-12-30 04:08:16]
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Re: Love Unspoken
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by grim6669 on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 04:11:53 AM AEST
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| oOo... i don't really know what to say about it... but it's really really good... i like it alot |
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Re: Love Unspoken
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 06:36:40 AM AEST
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| Very good. |
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Re: Love Unspoken
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 08:25:45 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Love Unspoken
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by gabby521 on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 01:24:25 PM AEST
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| I loved it! There are so many emotions that I can relate to that are far better expressed than I could ever try to express them. Well done. Keep up the good work. |
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