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New Begining
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 07:00:39 AM in AEST
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HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE..
I woke up this morning,
the worlds been looking grim,
suddenly I realized,
it had been coloured in,
I heard the birds singing,
the world looked bright and new.
then I realized,I was singing to.
I wont be unhappy, I wont be forlorn,
In this new year, its time to be reborn,
Somtimes its a struggle, its hard sometimes to live,
today I realized, the word has lots to give,
When the new year comes,stares me in the face,
i'll open up my arms ready to embrace,
Im hopeing to share all my feelings new,
with all my family and friends who always have been so true..
Im sure we will have days,
when our hearts are glum,
so keep looking for the rainbows,
that glimmer in the sun..
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2005-12-30 07:00:39]
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Re: New Begining
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 08:15:17 AM AEST
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| Cool poem,well done. |
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Re: New Begining
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by Manda2 on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 12:14:46 PM AEST
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| I absolutely loved this poem and pray that all those feelings stay with you because you are so right, the world has lots to give and it is also full of rainbows. xx |
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Re: New Begining
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:44:05 PM AEST
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To all that's wrong, there's something good
You look at it like we all should
I thank you for a lesson learned
Another 5 gold stars earned
Thankee for comment on my poem!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: New Begining
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by UnmovedMover on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:19:10 PM AEST
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I give it 5 stars, good poem. I always love to read/hear optimism.
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Re: New Begining
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:50:37 PM AEST
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Enchantingly brilliant~!
As Lord Byron said: "Be thou the rainbow in the storms of life. The evening beam that smiles the clouds away, and tints tomorrow with prophetic ray."
~Lilly-Quill
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