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Last Goodbye
Contributed by
manders
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 08:39:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Now i'm fading, waitng
To leave this place and be replaced
Your asking yourself "Why did she do it? It wasn't her time."
You brought this upon yourself
Because of your selfishness and carelessness
You said "It was just one last kiss, so i could be in an eternal bliss."
For that i'm goin away
This is how i repay
To you my love, my life
I now see the light
Shining out of the dark deep night
As you cry
You can read this and remember the old times
When i told you i loved you and good night
For this is my last goodbye
Copyright ©
manders
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2005-12-30 20:39:52]
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:40:37 PM AEST
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Well I hope this is just good writing.
Sad but written well.
huggs,
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Kayden on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:42:36 PM AEST
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wow that was an incredible last line...
This is one really good write...
You make the reader feel how you feel...
Awesome!! |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:15:30 PM AEST
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painfully intense, I hope this is just a poem and not something more though
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by gigglez08 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:24:46 AM AEST
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Well Written
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