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WHAT YOU DID TO ME
Contributed by
LOSTtrust
on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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im tired of the lies god pleaze set me freee when i look in your eyes, i can finally see
when i gave you my heart you just threw it away you tore me apart leaving me alone in the dark
you kept pushing my love more and more i should of known they were right..your a whore
i thought you were the part of me that i had never seen i thought i needed you to live but know i can see thetruth that i still cant believe
i see all the secrets and all of your lies and everytime the lies vanish when i look in your eyes
i still remember the first time we kissed back then it was a never ending bliss the love that i have for you will never fade away i tried everything to forget you but my life is not the same
why am i so stupid when it comes to letting go i have to hide the truth and im going to let you go
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Re: WHAT YOU DID TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlaw_mutiny on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:33:58 PM AEST (User
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not a bad wtrite good job
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Re: WHAT YOU DID TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by jessejames on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:44:45 PM AEST (User
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good write
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Re: WHAT YOU DID TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by humboldtsweetie33 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 01:11:19 AM AEST (User
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nice job...great job with rhyming...takecare
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