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Withering embrace
Contributed by
crow6279
on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 11:30:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Her withering embrace envelopes me
late in the night during fitful dreams
Tempting and alluring...I lose myself
carried forth into her world of illusion
I see her face during waking hours
reflections in the window panes summon me
A voice on the breeze to caress my heart
pulling me toward that which I cannot have
Quiet reflection will never come
mounds of regret trip me...I stumble
I search for the answers to questions not asked
weary of chasing unattainable goals
I find myself wandering lost and alone
grasping at auras of violet and blue
Intent on filling this nothingness inside
feeding on memories bittersweet
Reason abandons me in my prolonged quest
missing opportunities offered freely
I understand not to try is to fail...to fall
though failure is all that awaits me
So alone with my thoughts I await the night
anticipation and anguish on my brow
Closing my eyes I plead for her to come
and wrap me in her withering embrace
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Re: Withering embrace
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by shelby on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:31:49 PM AEST
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so very lovely but so darn sad. I loved each word. I hope she does come to you.Your to sweet to be this lonely
hugs for you
Michelle |
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Re: Withering embrace
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by crow6279 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:40:27 PM AEST
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| thanks for the sentiment...but she isn't coming. she is lost to me |
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Re: Withering embrace
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 02:57:19 AM AEST
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Very senseous, tender, longing write.
A person can tell u put your soul into these words.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Withering embrace
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:52:59 PM AEST
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| such an emotional write, i know how you feel, only w/ a guy...time can heal but it's hard to forget the pain you know. Well Great write. |
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