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Merciless
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 03:40:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I loved you like there was no tomorrow
I cried for you when times got tough
And you promised me you'd never leave
But when I needed you most
You never showed up
I screamed out your name
As I ran in fear
I watched blood fall to the ground
Like tears calling for you
You said you'd never let me down
That I was the one you wanted to protect
But when I needed you worst
You slipped away like fleeting mist
On a brisk morning sunrise
Fadeing into the darkness
To watch me fall
A gleam in your eye
Showed no mercy at all
Whipping the blade out
You attack my soul
Plunging its bearing fang
Into me as I scream
"merciless!"
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2005-12-31 15:40:44]
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Re: Merciless
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by Estranged-Thespian on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 03:49:10 PM AEST
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| that's really kind nice. I started to read it as a "flow poem" (a poem that's meant to all go together well), but then I remebered how it was written and read it as a rant poem instead (in which context it's really impressive) |
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