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Betrayed
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dc
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Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 07:11:09 PM in AEST
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When theres nothing left theres no confusion
When its all a lie - theres no belief
And theres a peace in emptiness
Even failure offers some relief
Like St. Peter when the rooster crowed - Like Judas rolled over for a bag of gold
Theres nothing left to feel or reason to be afraid
Like St. Peter when the rooster crowed - Like Judas sold out for a bag of gold
Theres no one to be strong for and I have been betrayed
I have been betrayed
Death like a shot of heroin Warmth and calmness rolling through my veins
Drowning all these frantic demons Sooth and saturate my brains
Rid this haggard, tired body of a wounded soul that could not heal
Next life, place it just a little deeper and cast it in a shell of steel
And theres a peace in emptiness Even Failure offers some relief
When theres nothing left - theres no confusion
When its all a lie - theres no belief
And theres a place that you just end up
Man, youre thinking its all wrong
But once youre in there Its so familiar
Like you knew it all along
Like St. Peter when the rooster crowed - Like Judas rolled over for a bag of gold
Theres nothing left to feel or reason to be afraid
Like St. Peter When the rooster crowed Like Judas sold out for a bag of gold
Theres no one to be strong for And I have been betrayed
I have been betrayed
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Re: Betrayed
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 12:38:39 AM AEST
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Once again, I read and I am blown away. I was deeply moved by this stanza....
"Death like a shot of herion-Warmth and calmness rolling through my veins
Drowning all these frantic demons-Sooth and saturate my brains
Rid this haggard, tired body of a wounded soul that could not heal
Next life, place it just a little deeper and cast it in a shell of steel"
This was good man, really good. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Betrayed
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by crow6279 on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 01:14:50 AM AEST
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| very strong write...i like it |
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Re: Betrayed
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 12:40:41 AM AEST
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Awesome writing!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Betrayed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 12:37:27 PM AEST
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| i love the deep emotion in this. Very good! |
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Re: Betrayed
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 03:54:45 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write....
Jenni |
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