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New Year Restitution
Contributed by
Xnoybis
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Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 05:49:58 AM in AEST
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What new fear
Can you bring me
This new year?
Not any, I'd wager
But I'm no betting man
I have seen your potential
In such a short span
Though I am a warrior
And know nothing but war
I'm ready for a new batch
Of disasters to explore
I can dump my mind
And my heart
But still not manage
A fresh new start
But I'm determined to try
This Time
Around the bend, I swear
I will make you
My newest friend
You can't deny me
For forever, you know
You can paint me in Black
But not dot out my glow
This year will differ
I will show you
That I have learned
I'm my own Black and Blue
Outsmarting my smugness
Taking back what is mine
And realizing that
The Past is not my Time
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2006-01-01 05:49:58]
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Re: New Year Restitution
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:49:42 AM AEST
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Very impressive write.
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Re: New Year Restitution
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 11:23:33 AM AEST
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At some point in the last 24 hours, I made a conscious decision to not not not read any more New Year's poems. I... well... wasn't in the mood for happy, isn't-life-grand, celebrate the new year poetry. Then... I saw your title and couldn't resist giving this a read. And yeh... as it turns out, it's positive --- but it's certainly not fluff!
Nicely done. I enjoyed this.
~Snemmy
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Re: New Year Restitution
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by enigma on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:14:47 AM AEST
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...well done...like Paul Simon's, The Boxer, I think it is...another year...another round...crazy thing is, I'm the only one in the ring and I'm still losing!
...your expression was much appreciated...
ron...enigma |
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