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The Hunt
Contributed by
Zaknafein8891
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Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 04:18:30 PM in AEST
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In passing through a desolate sea of ash,
my attention caught my query last,
the fleeing sphere of golden light,
in warmth always out of reach but feels so right.
I tracked it ever west and gave chase fast,
this query is quite worth the fight,
though always at my back, my preditor, the night.
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Zaknafein8891
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2006-01-01 16:18:30]
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Re: The Hunt
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by zaknafein8891 on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 04:58:47 PM AEST
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| first word 4th line is supposed to be (its) i messed up but i think u guys got it anyway... enjoy... |
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Re: The Hunt
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by Briddy_G on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 12:44:19 AM AEST
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This is an interesting piece, as the imagery does not come to you until the very end (or perhaps just the comprehension).
In a way it would be beneficial to base another poem on this theme, exploring why the person in the poem is afraid of the dark... or even just addicted to the light... |
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Re: The Hunt
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:06:56 AM AEST
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I thought this was good.. I liked it.. Well done..
Take care
Christina |
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