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Whispers Of You
Contributed by
naturegirl
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Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 08:37:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She cries in the darkness
so alone and neglected
her dreams lay shattered
the love she gave rejected
Above the eerie silence
comes a whispered prayer
floating straight to Heaven
upon the cold night air
Searching for the answers
seeking wisdom from above
then a voice cries out softly
I miss you so my love
The softness of the zephyr
blowing gently this breeze
her prayers ride the wind
inside still longing to please
Amongst melancholy moonlight
faint echoes can be heard
whispered prayers are spoken
renewed sadness in each word
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naturegirl
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2006-01-01 20:37:01]
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Re: Whispers Of You
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:44:34 PM AEST
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| such a sad and emotional write, but you conveyed them well, great job. |
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Re: Whispers Of You
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by Channing on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:38:41 PM AEST
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Very good write, sad and dark. Good write!
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