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Its Me You Adore
Contributed by
Fiona
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Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In my head I create a delusion of the girl you desire
A girl I detest, yet strongly admire
Her hair is long and falls down her back
Her brown curly locks exactly in tact
Those big brown eyes and luscious lips
Her body proportioned right down to her hips
Her long tanned legs so naturally thin
So utterly perfect, it must be a sin
Her face is porcelain, and clear as can be
A perfection so pure the whole world can see
Her breasts are large, her stomach is flat
Not a man in the world she couldnt attract
The kindness in her voice, the love she displays
A trait that will be there for all of her days
Her crazy sense of humour and her gorgeous smile
The qualities in a girl that makes dating worthwhile
So when I sit and think of my many flaws
It makes me wonder why your still with me at all
I love you so much, you deserve so much more..
But you assure me by saying its ME you adore
Copyright ©
Fiona
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2003-01-25 17:40:00]
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Re: Its Me You Adore
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:42:58 PM AEST
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| It's not what's on the outside that counts, it's what's on the inside that matters. I feel this way sometimes. Good write. *S* Cynthia |
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