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Just Friends
Contributed by
rocken88
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Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Your eyes are beautiful,
piercing through me.
Your touch sends chills not only through my body,
but through my heart.
The hugs hold me,
protect me,
and your coat warms me.
Your smile brightens my day.
My feelings are growing,
gaining strength each moment.
I like you so much,
but you say,
we're just friends.
Copyright ©
rocken88
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2006-01-02 01:32:05]
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Re: Just Friends
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:33:19 AM AEST
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| says a lot in just a few well chosen words, nice write :-) |
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Re: Just Friends
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by BondiDan on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 02:21:24 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem
Fantastic use of onomatopoeia one of the best uses i have seen!
I really felt what you were saying
please post more! |
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