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The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists
Contributed by
Poetic_Soul_of_Iowa
on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:33:11 AM in AEST
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It will make you tremble
It will excite your senses
It may even make you shed a tear
When they rock out on stage
The fists hit the air
And there name starts to be chanted
They are the band of all bands
They are the gods of the music industry
They are Disturbed
The sight of the thousands of fists in the air
Will excite you
It will entrance you
The sight will make you scream
It will make you throw your fist up
And shout with all your might
The sight of ten thousand fists in the air
Will be stuck in your mind
For the rest of your life
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Re: The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 02:25:26 AM AEST
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| i love disturbed...this poem describes how music can get inside you and how awesome concerts are |
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Re: The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:31:36 AM AEST
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| dont know the band but loved the imagery, good read :-) |
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Re: The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:08:38 PM AEST
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I follow Shmokin's words. I really loved the way you brought the reader into one of your memories. I could almost see it.
Take care.
David |
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