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love aint real
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 02:54:23 AM in AEST
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today i give up on beauty
today i give up on hope
today i feel like dieing
collapsing under reality's shove
how long can i be optimistic?
how long can i keep this fake smile
how long does it take
before i drown in my own denial
i can only laugh it off so long
and only so many tears can be withheld
only for awhile can you forgive
especially with all innocence expelled
i wont fall for it anymore
the damage has been done
my open door is closing
no longer will i be blinded by the sun
yea today im giving up on it all
that's right, you hear it true
im done being naive
its time to grow up...
time i got a clue
time to give up on love
we all know its not sincere
its made in a hollywood basement
its patented and bought with the dollar bill
believed by teenage girls
used by guys to get backseat thrills
i mean how dumb do i have to be
to say i love you, and believe it too?
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Re: love aint real
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:47:05 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: love aint real
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:01:46 AM AEST
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| Nice read, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: love aint real
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by rocken88 on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 11:27:29 AM AEST
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| very sad. even possibly true. I suppose we all have to go through the same kind of pain before we realize it too. great write. |
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Re: love aint real
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST
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i have a feeling one day you may change your mind
for now...good write |
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Re: love aint real
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 03:13:46 AM AEST
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I am sorry to hear you're giving up on writing SM...Why? I'm hoping it's just for a little while. I've always enjoyed your writes, they are always so heartfelt, no matter the subject. You have a way with words that many readers can relate to, and that's good. Wow. Those last two lines...geesh. I could go on a tangent here, but I'll save myself the embarrassment : )
You did well expressing your emotions here. I sure hope to see a new post from you in the not-so-distant future!
Take Care. Thank you for your awesome comment on my write too by the way, I appreciate it very much.
Scorp.
(Nodding quite a bit at the title too)
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Re: love aint real
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 03:38:53 AM AEST
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| so very sad |
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Re: love aint real
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by MissMandy on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 12:19:10 AM AEST
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| Cynical: Expressing jaded or scornful skepticism or negativity. |
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Re: love aint real
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:55:03 AM AEST
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This was a really good poem and I can relate the first half... I hope that you have changed your mind about love at least alittle not all love is like that...
Take care
Christina |
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