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Hopelessly Helpless
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 04:51:56 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I wonder what youre doing Sometimes I dont really care Sometimes I feel as things never change Sometimes I imagine you were never there
Often I think of you Often I wish I still knew you Often the moon hangs low Often do the rain drops fall in the snow
On occasion I rejoice in this gift On occasion I embrace the tangible rift On multiple occasions I have forgotten you exist On many occasions I have found ways to thrive and persist
But never do I regret one little bit Never will I forget the constant bullpit Never does the sun not rise in its proper form Never meant me any pain or harm
Always will I keep you in lofty thoughts Always will the costly memories haunt Always the sacrifice is simply letting it go Always is the living, and living is the only way to ever know
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Re: Hopelessly Helpless
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 03:22:50 AM AEST (User
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Sounds a little sad, I suppose. Hope things improve for you this year. Nice write.
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Re: Hopelessly Helpless
(User Rating: 1 ) by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:07:43 PM AEST (User
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good write, I enjoyed it in sort of an ironic way. its nice how one stanza affixes into the next, good rhyme scheme too.
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