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True Love
Contributed by
hearts4pain
on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 10:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in this moment
time is frozen and my heart stops beating
my lips locked with yours and my eyes glued shut
your arms tied around me and all the candles burned out
the music stopped playing and the tv's on mute
this moment is more valuable than gold
its beauty is greater than a rose
in this moment silence is everything
because no words can describe this ineffable feeling of affection i have for him
no touch can describe this sense of underlying oneness i have with him
this is a moment of truth
because without a doupt this must be love
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hearts4pain
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2006-01-02 22:14:09]
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Re: True Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 01:10:58 AM AEST
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| This is great. Far too often I think love poems are cheesy, but this one is not. Well done. |
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Re: True Love
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by Kayden on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:21:20 PM AEST
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Awesome... You let me know how much you feel for this guy... You really made this poem come from the heart... Great Job!!!!
-------- Jimmy |
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