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Oh! Lord
Contributed by
bhav
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Oh! Lord why did you make me so small?
People just come, make fun of me and have a ball.
Oh! Lord why did you make me sensitive?
Anyone and anything hurts my fragile heart and people call me a crybaby.
Oh! Lord why do you always make me feel so insecure?
I dont know what I should expect the next, everyday feels like that of a person a float in the sea after a ship wreck.
Oh! Lord why did you make me innocent?
Everyone takes me for a ride,
Whats the use of this innonce?
Oh! Lord
Why do people say that I am dumb?
Am I so bad creation of yours that people look at me as if on my back I have a huge hump.
Oh! Lord why did you give me the sweetness of life?
Its so short, that I fail to even realize when it comes and when it passes by.
Oh! Lord for years I have been lonely?
I know you have made me so very special that I will always remain lonely.
Oh! Lord thanks for giving me the power to express my self in words and for making me a poet.
Poetry is the world where I never feel lonely,
My thoughts are my best friends and they have made me a poet.
Oh! Lord thanks for making me struggle at every step of life.
At least I will never forget that you are the almighty who gave me this life.
Oh! Lord thanks for giving me financial crunches,
It has made me a miser and people dislike me like hell.
So many minuses and a few pluses,
Why me lord?
You will say Son, everyone asks me the same question?
My answer is the same I love you all equally, but if I serve you everything on the platter, will you remember me?
I said if you love all equally, why did you make me ultra sensitive, insecure, innocent, dumb& lonely.
Why?
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bhav
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2003-01-25 20:20:00]
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Re: Oh! Lord
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by SpreadYourWings on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:39:09 PM AEST
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| I too feel your pain bhav. My whole life i've asked, "Why Me?" great write! |
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Re: Oh! Lord
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:29:20 AM AEST
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OMG I ask him all the same! This was so great I loved this alot it makes you really think,Life here cant be perfect or they'd call it Heaven!
I will read again again! Christina |
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Re: Oh! Lord
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by bhav on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 10:46:55 AM AEST
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| Thanks; spread your wings for liking my poem. In a sense glad to know that our feelings are mutual. I feel life is nothing but questions to be answered by us until the inevitable happens. |
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Re: Oh! Lord
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by bhav on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 10:48:22 AM AEST
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| Hi! Christina thanks for liking my poem and also for writing in that you will be reading it again and again. Frankly when you wrote that you will be reading it again and again I felt really very humble deep down in my heart and also felt thankful to the almighty who gave me the boon of writing poems and of touching people’s hearts with my poems. |
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