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UNREAL...
Contributed by
TKN2MYGRAVE
on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 02:32:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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EVERDAY I WALK THROUGH LIFE,
WEARING A MASK FOR MY SOUL TO HIDE,
HAPPY, I'M PRETENDING WITHOUT A DOUBT,
BUT ON THE INSIDE I'M SCREAMING TO GET OUT,
THOUGH I ALWAYS HAVE A SMILE ON,
DO NOT BE FOOLED FOR IT IS A CON,
UNFORTUNATELY THE TRUTH ABOUT ME YOU'LL NEVER SEE,
BECAUSE OF MY SECRETS,
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW THE REAL ME...
Copyright ©
TKN2MYGRAVE
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2006-01-04 14:32:01]
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Re: UNREAL...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 02:36:54 PM AEST
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incredible write, volumes in such a small piece! Many of us have felt this way.
Sometimes it takes a true person with spirit to go on smiling though they feel like crying instead. Its always good to release our feelings also
Michelle |
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Re: UNREAL...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 02:40:56 PM AEST
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really great poem. I've felt like that too and its an awful feeling knowing you've been lieing to everyone but anywayz great poem loved it!
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Re: UNREAL...
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by darkgoddess on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 03:14:35 PM AEST
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| I felt the exact same way for a long time and its still hard for me to show my true emotions. it really sucks. but that was put perfectly |
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Re: UNREAL...
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by sararose1950 on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 04:33:25 PM AEST
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| I agree very much with the other comments- I am the same way-great write!! Peace and Light |
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Re: UNREAL...
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by LifeFadingAway on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 07:25:49 PM AEST
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Good work, it's hard to trust others, let them see the turth, let them see who you are. Covering up your problems, do so many things, don't give yourself the time to think about it.
I learned much in the last year, and 1 thing I've learned is if people don't accept you for who you are, they don't deserve your attention... |
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