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What Time Has Washed Away
Contributed by
GracieB
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:41:00 PM in AEST
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If memories are how we measure time
Then time is but a fallacy it seems
A vanishing away of hopes and dreams
Amidst the faded colors of the mind
And with the grieving and the healing tide
We search for comfort buried deep inside
Then desperately we cling to what we may
And set aside what time has washed away
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If memories are how we measure time
Then what is time if we remember not
Existence counted only when its caught
Then aged and seasoned, perfectly refined
So hidden are those memories of pain
That now are nothing more than just a stain
A hue within a line upon the face
A broken heart now gone without a trace
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If memories are how we measure time -
If no one should remember who I am
Have I become a grain of sifting sand
When to this world I've said my last goodbye
And does it really matter in the end
Except within this heart I hold within
Of dreams escaped, the longing after all
Is something Father Time will not recall
~
If memories are how we measure time
Then time is but a fallacy it seems
A vanishing away of hopes and dreams
Amidst the faded colors of the mind
And with the grieving and the healing tide
We search for comfort hidden deep inside
Then desperately we cling to what we may
And set aside what time has washed away
By Gracie B
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GracieB
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2006-01-04 20:41:00]
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Re: What Time Has Washed Away
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by trini on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 09:08:50 PM AEST
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wow. this was excellent. i love the way you worded it. everything had such a defined meaning. i loved reading this.
keep up the great work
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Re: What Time Has Washed Away
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 09:31:09 PM AEST
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What a masterpiece!!!!!
I'll say no more...
Jenni |
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Re: What Time Has Washed Away
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:15:10 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, a joy to read. |
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Re: What Time Has Washed Away
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by djs on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 03:36:51 PM AEST
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| your writing style is so much different than my own - so much better. this poem is brilliant. i can't wait to read more of your work. |
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Re: What Time Has Washed Away
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by djs on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 03:38:19 PM AEST
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| your writing style is so much different than my own - so much better. this poem is brilliant. i can't wait to read more of your work. |
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