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Promise Me
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:52:37 PM in AEST
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Promise Me
Promise me
that when the trees lay bare in winter
you'll bring the sunshine to my door
that when i'm lonely
you'll sit by me and hold my hands in yours
Promise me
that when cotton candy smells drift from the fair
you'll dance the chicken dance until we both fall, laughing
that when the gulls fly overhead crying piously
you'll wade with me amongst the swirling waves
Promise me
that when the dark of night frightens me at 3am
you'll light the flashlight and make bunnies on the wall
that when the the first clump of dirt fills my final bed
you'll think of me each day and hold my love inside your heart
Promise me
Carol Sossaman 1/04/06
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Re: Promise Me
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by frankcube on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:37:17 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was very inspirational and deep. Certainly something only a well-learned poet could create.
Please check out my latest poem 'Don't Worry' by Frankcube. |
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Re: Promise Me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 01:01:37 AM AEST
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a very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Promise Me
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by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 01:15:36 AM AEST
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What a sad state of knowledge. What has the majority of the world hanging on to an empty vow? I am astonished at the sincerity of this write. Personally, this concept makes me sick, but this was written well it was solid and it did its job. For an average person this would have inspired feeling and warmth.
~silence is the only promise ever kept~weepingprophet |
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Re: Promise Me
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:20:50 AM AEST
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OOOOoooooo Oooooooo Oooooooo !!!!!!!
Coral !!!!! ( squeezies ) I know the chicken dance !!! ( wonders a bit late if he should really admit to that ) I don't know how to make bunnies .... but I can grab a mirror and we'll call it a disco !!!!
Fabulous write Carol !!! Way to start the new year !!!
Nazzy ~
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Re: Promise Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 03:52:00 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice of poetry carol written 2 one's own ideal's and exspectation's of love.
welcome back 2 these pages of self expression . . .
Ben |
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Re: Promise Me
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by twinkey on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:12:41 PM AEST
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| omg.. i loved this poem so much haha it made me cry awsome job.. keep it up:) > sam |
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Re: Promise Me
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 02:45:27 PM AEST
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| Great stuff for the start of the year! The litany-ish way you wrote this was really sweet, it was quite the romantic piece. You ask of very little from your mate as well, which is nice in it's the way that you're just asking for that companionship everybody wants. I'm sure everyone can relate to this poem in one form or another. Great write!! |
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Re: Promise Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 12:30:29 PM AEST
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Class, class,class! great write.
WJ I believe got deleted for it's tame content!????
J |
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Re: Promise Me
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:30:22 AM AEST
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Quite well written and very poetic as well
what more can one ask for!? I think I liked the
first stanza the best, but they were all quite
good. Thanks for commenting on my poem
by the way.
Bobo (Joel) |
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