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This is What I See
Contributed by
Poetic_Soul_of_Iowa
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Take a look at me
What is it that you see?
I can see by the look on your face
that you dont know what it is you see.
I would say that I'm nothing
but that isnt true.
I cant tell you what I am
but I know what Im not.
My life it has purpose and structure
Im not gunna throw it away
over some accident thats my fault.
I can live with the consequences of my actions.
I can deal with the fact that I did what I did.
But you cant see that can you?
All you can see is that I screwed
and now I need to be punished.
As if a month isnt long enough
I gotta go a year and a half.
I would say thats over kill
but its what the state threw at me.
When I come outta this
imma be stronger then ever.
You just wait and see
Ill amaze you
Hell I may even shock you.
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Re: This is What I See
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by frankcube on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:28:58 PM AEST
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Very nicely written, with a good sense of prose and nuance.
Please check out my latest poem 'Don't Worry' by Frankcube. |
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