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The Dream
Contributed by
just_ace
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Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:30:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My hearts in pieces
It beats no more
The words I love you
Couldnt replace what I saw
So its back to the bottle
As I pick up my pen
And write about how it was
Way back then
If only were the words
On which I relied
But now have become the two I despise
So its back to green eyes
And those forced smiles
If it meant I were with you
I would walk for miles
Tears staining the page
As I write this all down
I never thought it would be this hard
Not having you around
We were meant to be together
From now til the end
But now this road
Has hit a bend
I awake from my dream
And it hits me as I fall
None of this matters
I never had you at all
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just_ace
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2006-01-05 02:30:10]
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Re: The Dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jimmato on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:41:19 AM AEST
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| this is good-> heart felt & honest. Lose rhythm a couple of times but held together ok. Cheers |
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Re: The Dream
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:39:42 PM AEST
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| very sad. i hope you got over it and found someone else. Good write! |
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Re: The Dream
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:46:21 AM AEST
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Some dreams are so real they put in a place and time
Feelings still pine
Wanting not wanting the feeling at all
Yet we fall
Hanging on
Falling down
Flying high
For nothing we sigh
I like this poem you place me there
Good writing |
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