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Losing You
Contributed by
PS_iloveyou
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 10:03:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Somethings not right
it feels so wrong
as I sit here and wait
the night is so long
You said you would be here
so I watch and I wait
11,12,it's now 1
it is getting so late
Two nights have gone by
as I sit here alone
wondering what you are doing
to me it is unknown
Thoughts that you have found another
keep running through my mind
wondering if you love her
am I to be left behind
I know I have no rights to you
it's not fair of me to ask
but would you please let me know
it's not that hard of a task
Copyright ©
PS_iloveyou
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2002-07-25 22:03:46]
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Re: Losing You
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by Kassidi on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:03:58 AM AEST
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This was a beautiful, but sad poem. Please, let your heart sing again!
Kassidi |
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Re: Losing You
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by markymark on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:05:12 AM AEST
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| Would'nt life be so much better if we all had the gift of hindsight...this comes across so very strong, one can almost touch it...well done...take care, Mark... |
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Re: Losing You
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by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:08:06 AM AEST
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