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Amber Eyes
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 05:15:47 PM in AEST
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See her eyes of amber gleaming
Pools of peace and hope redeeming
Closer still, dare I to gaze
Light of moon upon them plays
Let our souls, as one, entwine
Grant me this, thy kiss of wine
Turn my tears to loving sighs
Angel with the amber eyes
Should I fail in this my quest
Still the heart within my chest
Take from me this useless breath
Give thy love or give me death
Yea, to live is dark and vain
Nothing more than lonely pain
In your hands my future lies
Angel with the amber eyes
L. Carling c2006
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 05:52:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful as ever, Larry...
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by Mangos on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 06:30:20 PM AEST
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this is a lovely piece
nice job |
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 08:28:13 PM AEST
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Amazing larry, never fail to keep me wanting more
~Clark |
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 09:43:42 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful and awesome.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:40:15 PM AEST
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Sue *applauds loudly*. Larry this is absolutely sensational. You have such a flare with a pen. A truly talented and gifted poet who has such an amazing way with words. One never tires of reading ur remarkable work Larry. Well done.
*hugs*
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:59:31 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned Larry I loved the imagery
in this as well as the rhyme scheme. Thanks
for sharing this.
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 09:59:12 PM AEST
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Larry, you are one of a kind, as is your writes.
Rock on my friend....Mike |
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Re: Amber Eyes
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 06:08:34 AM AEST
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Larry, this one made we weak at the knees. Good thing I'm a well balanced hetero, because these lines are sold gold arrows of cupid, my friend.
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