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The End of A Family
Contributed by
flamingblade
on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Tell me why
You made me feel like a fly
on the wall
Like I should've felt tall
But I screamed of feeling small
I don't understand how I feel
I can't tell if it's real
But I miss you a whole lot
I scream and cry
And I almost die
When I think about you
Why you had to die
So I cry
Why?Why?Why?
I now lay
Right next to you
In the ground
How deep six feet is
An era has ended
It's all in the past
All of us gone now
Laying in rows and rows
I've hoped so badly for so long
That we won't be forgotten
Copyright ©
flamingblade
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2006-01-05 22:53:29]
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Re: The End of A Family
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 04:48:15 PM AEST
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Sadness....lost...pain ...feelings linked to a great lost :(
Good structure and rhythm ...very good writing!
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