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Religion and Love
Contributed by
Benny14
on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 04:02:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Theres a distance between us
But reticent demeanors
Will not make my good and bad believers
Cause more than you know I need this
Time moves on, and the world along with it
Not often enough do we get second chances
Love is work and well work for love
Time despises love
For only it grasps a lifetime in a moment
Or a moment last a lifetime
Religion and love
Have more in common than Ill admit
Both rely on faith and hope
The undiscovered truth will always be half-lit
I am the Adam to your Eve
The Want to your Need
I love reliving mans history
Of true romantic creed
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2006-01-06 04:02:08]
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Re: Religion and Love
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by enigma on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 06:57:05 AM AEST
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...it was a little choppy, but I kind of think the choppiness actually worked...it prevented me from flitting through it, from surfing, from just skimming over the top of it...it forced me to stop and reread...to reconsider...to think...
...for me, the concept of Religion is an inhibiting structure, a man-made box, institutionalized spirituality...
...if by Religion you mean unfettered autonomous spirituality, then I would have to agree that Love is the essence of a healthy Spirituality...
...some good thoughts...thanks for putting them into words and sharing them with all of us...
...thanks...
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Re: Religion and Love
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 06:25:42 AM AEST
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Benny, Good street philosophy, straight to the heart of it. I especially liked
Time despises love
For only it grasps a lifetime in a moment
Or a moment last a lifetime
nice idea.
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Re: Religion and Love
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:33:48 AM AEST
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and now back to the one that got my attention.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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