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Blessed chaos
Contributed by
igba
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Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 11:19:29 AM in AEST
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instantly bedlam takes the reins
tranquility and serenity long forgotten
seeming disturbed calm takes a walk
chaos swaggers in smugly
An air of dread clouds the atmosphere
The crafty mind stalls at the threat
suddenly vulnerable and uncertain
Greed swiftly turns into confusion
despite the supposed negativities that chaos breeds
it"s very unfriendly towards greed
For it"s alleged many shortcomings
it has a cause to blow it"s trumpet
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igba
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2006-01-06 11:19:29]
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Re: Blessed chaos
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:51:12 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
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Re: Blessed chaos
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:16:06 AM AEST
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...my first jelled thought was this sounded like the manic side of manic-depression...people that have the disorder often enjoy the energy that fuels their ability to accomplish so much...many stop taking their medictions because they miss that energy flow...to go along with that, the manic depressive person experiences a lot of pain during the depressive end of the disorder...the fellowship of pain creates a whole lot of understanding and compassion...
...I'm not manic-depressive and chaos scares the ***** out of me...
...I'll be back...
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Re: Blessed chaos
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:35:58 PM AEST
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Cool poem !
Blow your trumpet. I found this humerous
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