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Star light
Contributed by
dalamar
on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 12:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Star light,
Star bright
First star I see tonight
Wish I may, wish I might
Wish the Wish I dont dream tonight
Sleepless night
Hopeless life
And with I do declare thy holy knife
To stop the pain of thy life
Sleepless life, never more
Time for sleep that I do adore
To hear the words to up pour
For all things to come to an end
Goodbad
But let tonight be thy night
Of never ending rest.
Copyright ©
dalamar
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2006-01-06 12:17:43]
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Re: Star light
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:19:46 PM AEST
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| Very good work! beautifully writen. |
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Re: Star light
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by sassydovebird on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:20:47 PM AEST
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| i feel such sadness,desolation..one should not wish for life to end..only continue in a better way..so touching..very well written....sassy |
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Re: Star light
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:34:31 PM AEST
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Such a sad thought provoking write. One should never wish their life to end, but wish of better brighter days ahead. A sad very well penned piece of poetry.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Star light
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by Jessie53067 on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:46:35 PM AEST
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...yeah so I wasn't gonna comment on mulitiple works and look like I was reading through everything even though I am, but damn hun this is just...
*heart grab wrench twist pull out and throw on floor motion*
Yeah.
-Jessie |
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