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Love Stoke
Contributed by
jessalynn
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Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 01:11:48 PM in AEST
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Yoh have walked away from me
you've said your goodbye's
your heart felt sorrows
covered in lies
you've turned your back on us
selfish denile
you took our life away
crushed smiles
falicy you made
When did it all change
no more meaning of home
so consumed
we sorrow
too wipe the tears away
questions linger
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jessalynn
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2006-01-06 13:11:48]
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Re: Love Stoke
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by sassydovebird on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 01:51:22 PM AEST
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| i feel your resentment,your anger at this friend..the words are good..great write...sassy |
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Re: Love Stoke
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:01:21 PM AEST
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Very emotional write..can see pain ...anger.
Good work!
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Re: Love Stoke
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
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| very emotional write .. i hope things get better for you ,, alot of anger in this poem..G reat job... |
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Re: Love Stoke
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:47:30 PM AEST
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I to went through a divorce I didn't want nor could believe.
A spouse paining children demolished
Too many tears to wipe away
Questions will all days linger
Sad, but a very meaningful poem
Emotions are really felt
Good job |
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