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My Ballerina
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 10:15:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dance with me tonight, my ballerina
'Neath the moon and stars romantic glow
Let our stage be here, beside the ocean
Only you and I need ever know
Prying eyes won't see us in the darkness
Bare our souls and bodies on the sand
Swaying to the music of the waters
Touch my lips, and I'm at your command
Softly now, a gentle breeze is blowing
Running windy fingers through your hair
I am spellbound by your ageless beauty
Sighs of love soon fill the midnight air
Tongues entwine, we fall to earth together
Mars, the only witness to the sight
Time will hold its breath until the morning
Ballerina, dance with me tonight
L. Carling c2006
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2006-01-06 22:15:15]
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 10:32:49 PM AEST
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What a beautiful invitation.....
Great work as always, my friend..
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 10:42:16 PM AEST
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Lovely, Larry. One is nearly inclined to sway as they read this piece. There is, of course, more than one way to dance -- this, clearly, is dancing with words.
Sighing a tad,
~Snemmy
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 02:01:22 AM AEST
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Oh Larry ... exquisitely beautiful and beautifully exquisite! I can't get over
how wonderfully woven your words are. Or how excellent your word choices
are! Or how utterly passionate it is. Oh my, yes. Dripping, in fact.
This, my dear friends, is what is known as a work of art !
~Breezy
(who always LOVES larry's work, regardless ...
happy to see a more 'sweet' write from you.)
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 03:38:38 AM AEST
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| Lovely, tender, romantic, good write, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 05:12:45 AM AEST
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smooth tender words
Shari |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by dc on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 12:49:58 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 02:51:55 PM AEST
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This is wonderful Larry!! You are one of the best!!!!You could show up some of the best writers!!!
Shari :) |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:12:15 PM AEST
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Larry an outstanding well delivered and perfectly penned piece of poetry that flows with love and passion. You're a remarkable and very talented poet who can produce masterpieces time and time again. Well done Larry.
*warm hugs*
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Re: My Ballerina
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by SkC_cutie on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 12:15:56 PM AEST
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| i love it!!! I thionk that this one is another one of my favorites that u have written!! thanks for your encouragement and being there for me :) luv ya |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 04:22:19 PM AEST
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This is a great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 09:57:09 PM AEST
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Very touching poem Larry. It makes the reader melt in to it. Great, just Great.
Have one on me friend,
Mike |
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Re: My Ballerina
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 07:59:10 AM AEST
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| This is a very sensual piece which wants me to hit the sands and the ocean air to dance freely under stars...such a refreshing expression of loves freedom.Well done friend. |
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