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Flame Dancing
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:36:32 PM in AEST
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Mesmerized by the dancing flames
Vacillate between comfort and pain
Exquisite the colors
Yet dangerous and deadly the flame
An undulating pattern from a roaring flame to an ember glow
Very unpredictable, as is life
Our moods rising and falling, to peak and subside
Sometimes controlled, others with strife
Our Creator provided fire so we might exist
Such an essential element for survival
From the creation of man to the civilized
The flames have an existence with their own rivival
Such a multitude of diversity, too numerous to mention
Eventually my return to consciousness aspires
Having traversed the universe to return
Back to staring at our living room fireplace fire
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2006-01-09 15:36:32]
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Re: Flame Dancing
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by dalamar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:51:23 PM AEST
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I love it alot. Fire can really do that to some people. Keep up the good work
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Re: Flame Dancing
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by fearlessleader7 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 06:00:00 PM AEST
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Very nice! Some nice imagery there.
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Re: Flame Dancing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 12:45:36 PM AEST
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I've just read this after 4 cans of full strengh lager, my eyes are squinting up to the screen like a waste of space who doesn't realise the christmas festivites are over and I've come to the conclusion (drunk or sober) this is a jolly fine piece of work! very well written indeed.
J |
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Re: Flame Dancing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:12:49 AM AEST
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Lovely poem will, as your full imagination shows life. you went with that, to create full. profit from experience. enjoyed. RL
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Re: Flame Dancing
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:33:07 PM AEST
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I can stare at a fire for such a long time. I get lost within the dance ... the flicker ... the color ... and I love the heat. Oh and don't even get me goin on where my mind wanders off to ... I can relate well to what you have here Terry, and enjoyed the read very muchly ( LOL )
Nazzy ~ |
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