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Satan In The Suburbs
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 06:36:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Arrow head
Suck the poison out
The teeth marks outlined in red
Flesh yields to vast rips, to fast tears, to flat dead
Bludgeon with axes and machetes
Clubbed citizens in the deep tunnels of urban cities
Time in a vacuumed funnel of ducks sitting pretty
A one-time-deal
Travelers turn to inhabitants
Colonized the unimagined
Immobilized the armies gathered in the dark the dungeons
Shields, swords, caskets, and armor to protect the royal fortune
Suburban Satan patrols the farmers market
Stealth fighters prepare to launch heat guided rockets
A target, lethargic,
Ambidextrous, both hands on the red button
Public, intoxicated,
Both feet grounded in said nothing
In pairs of three the foreign rebels flee
In times of desperate need
A father in secret
Has abandoned
His childs mouth to feed
A mother has forsaken,
Shaken, in the bitter cold-
Her daughters right to breathe-
And grow old
They are justified and juxtaposed
Near, relief, one might suddenly suppose
In rare disbelief of what appears yet to unfold
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2006-01-09 18:36:04]
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Re: Satan In The Suburbs
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by ebooibo on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:24:22 PM AEST
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Re: Satan In The Suburbs
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:19:39 PM AEST
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....amazing....I loved the whole thing. I dont know how else to say it or what else to say.
Just keep it up...
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Re: Satan In The Suburbs
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 09:32:31 AM AEST
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This is... Excellant.. it's amazing.. I really enjoyed reading it alot and the flow was brillant.
thanks for the comment
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