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Typical Teenage Drama
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm really getting sick of this
"Oh shes been talkn' *****"
Get over it!!
Yet every one falls for it
Every time
Without a doubt
Confront the "problem"
Singled out
Can't you all just get a life?!
Nobody else cares
They just like the drama
We'll all forget
Something only one regrets
And in the end its all fake
Another ploy for attention
Another typical day of life
Another dumb-*** girl
Making a scene of cutting herself with a knife
Or some tiny razor
With paper thin cuts
And how "pain" overcame her
How it was just too much
She just wanted to be real
Is that such a crime?
If your as fake as her
Its just another pastime
But none of them get it
Its all a big lie
Go talk to someone
Who never really wanted life
Someone deeper than her make-up
And has a better reason to die
Not to mention that nifty eating disorder
You devloped over break
You still gain weight
And plenty more heartache
You dug this hole yourself
All thats left is to lie in your grave
I hate you
Suicide would be good
Six feet under
Just like you should
Now I wish I
Wasn't there for you
Better off dead
You said yourself: you had nothing to lose
Can't wait until you're gone
Its terrible to be said
I would rather move on
Not a single tear shed
Now I sit
With nothing to do
After I got this all out
I'm finally...over you
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2006-01-09 21:02:29]
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Re: Typical Teenage Drama
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by MysticFireFairy on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:15:03 PM AEST
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Omg I can really relate to this I am having the same problem with a girl at my school. I really like how you wrote it such hatred and despise.. Awsome keep it up your awsome..
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Re: Typical Teenage Drama
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:39:27 PM AEST
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ive known a few people like this they all seem
to have the same problem of their sleves
going up their arm to reveal *deep* cuts.
great emotion, great piece
diz |
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Re: Typical Teenage Drama
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:14:36 PM AEST
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| This is a powerful write! Very well done. I too feel for you. If you ever need to talk feel free to IM me... |
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Re: Typical Teenage Drama
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by Ice_Fox on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:41:09 PM AEST
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Wow!
I understand entirely what you are going through if your emotions are the same as portrayed in your poetry. Being a teen myself I understand all of that ***** your going through and how the hate just won't stop.
Midway through reading this, it reminded me of Eminem music. This is very good, what it lacks in rhyme it makes up for with sheer emotion and hate.
I look forward to reading your next work |
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