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Moonlight Rescue
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Lost in the woods It was getting dark So much for a quick Walk in the park
The moon showed full The night was clear Tired and scared He listened with both ears
He heard a howl It was a lonely sound Then a she wolf Came looking round
She looked at him He stared into her blue eyes Then to his surprise A woman began to materialize
Her beauty magnificent Under the stars light She smiled at him Asking if he was alright
As his plight he explained She smiled and took his hand Leading him out Of this barren land
At the edge of the woods She kissed him softly on his cheek Then running through the trees Of her tail was all he could peek
Years later he still thinks Of his night lost in the woods And the Lady wolf Which leaves his heart feeling good
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NoSaint
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2006-01-09 21:12:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Moonlight Rescue
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 09:02:58 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful --giving homage and glory to a creature in our midst that is often thought of as bad!
I love poems with happy endings. and they lived Happily Ever After............written very well, and presented as a wonderful tale!
Thank you for sharing with us Shari, really enjoyed this one too!
Warm love
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Re: Moonlight Rescue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 06:49:41 PM AEST (User
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This is like a fairytale Shari. A very well penned and delivered piece of poetry that captivates the reader from start to finish. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
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Re: Moonlight Rescue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 11:14:03 PM AEST (User
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oh I am just loving your poems that tell stories, wonderful short stories, could put all your poems together and make one giant book MP raquelLeah |
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