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My Empty Place
Contributed by
AmishGuy222000
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Enter upon this lonely place
Empty as the mind can be
Shattered glass is all I see
Broken into time and space
No trace or clue to my discrace
Left with only pieces of disturbing debris
Waiting for an echo to bounce back to me
I fear what was done can not be erased
Shaking on my hands and knees
Finally a memory bleeds into my mind
A savage crime on a dark night
Slowly weakening like a disease
With each blow a part of me is left behind
From now on nothing will be alright
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2006-01-10 13:35:48]
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Re: My Empty Place
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:45:39 PM AEST
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flowing and emotional write, nicely done
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