|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tunnel
Contributed by
poetryfreak13
on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 04:31:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
|
Sometimes she just sits and cries
And wonders why
This has happened to her
It never was fair
In any
Way
Shape
Or form
Why did I do that?
She wondered aloud
She sat
And listened
And heard no sound
She thinks
How did I get myself into this mess?
This place of solitude-always unbroken
I sometimes can see
The light at the end of the tunnel
But then
Just as quickly
It is gone
And I wonder
If I will ever
See it again-
Copyright ©
poetryfreak13
... [
2006-01-10 16:31:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tunnel
(User Rating: 1 )
by ElizabethLaura on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 05:13:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| A lot of people can relate with this poem..nice work |
|
|
Re: Tunnel
(User Rating: 1 )
by Suit_Of_Armor on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:09:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really like this poem. It really expresses your feelings on this subject. |
|
|
Re: Tunnel
(User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:31:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very beautiful and sad... the form is swell and well
crafted
I sometimes can see
The light at the end of the tunnel
But then
Just as quickly
It is gone
And I wonder
If I will ever
See it again-
such a despairing verse...
keep up the excellent writing |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
