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Don't Want To Die
Contributed by
Zacattack
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sharp as a blade
Sharpe as a knife
Slicing my skin smooth and nice,
Bleeding & leaking on the ground
Stumbling, fainting, & falling down,
Breathing heavy and breathing fast
it's your last breath, make it last,
Your eyes glisten as you cry
Becuase you just realized, you don't want to die.
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Zacattack
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2006-01-10 18:43:05]
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Re: Don't Want To Die
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 06:39:37 AM AEST
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| Very deep. I can relate a lot to this! I like this poem a lot, it is simple, but very pronounced. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Don't Want To Die
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by poetryfreak13 on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 04:55:46 PM AEST
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it's your last breath, make it last,
Your eyes glisten as you cry
Becuase you just realized, you don't want to die.
This is very powerful. This poem is great. |
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