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As the Sun Rises On the New Day
Contributed by
somario
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 11:13:00 PM in AEST
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As the sun rises on the new day
Let it gather me up and sweep me away
And in every moment that I lay wake
Let me grasp the time, and pleasure take
For a moment gone is a moment at waste
When the boundless joy I do not take
For time lost I cannot regain
And forever my soul to feel the pain
And in the hour when I forget
My heart shall sink in deep regret
But if this life I shall embrace
I will not be without my grace
To live and love and breathe with care
And my soul with you forever share
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2006-01-10 23:13:00]
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Re: As the Sun Rises On the New Day
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by mbarren on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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I really like poems of this type where each stanza (if i'm right) carrys it's own self-contained ideas which simplifies the understanding of the whole poem.
and one thing I trully believe in is neatly said in this part:
And in the hour when I forget
My heart shall sink in deep regret
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