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The People of the Fading Moonlight
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:24:00 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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There's another world you don't see
The people of the fading moonlight
They're living when you're asleep
They're out from two to five
Home at six on a good night
Invisible people you had no idea existed
Stay out of trouble
Try not to wake your slumber
Keep humble and never wonder why
They chose to live by the streelights
They breate an easy, free air
They live life to the fullest
Because nobody cares about them
Except one another
It's a secret
But feel welcome to come
However, keep one promise
Don't tell anyone
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2006-01-12 01:24:00]
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Re: The People of the Fading Moonlight
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by x0pium on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:32:17 AM AEST
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I really like this.
As I was reading it, I got a visual with it.
& That's definately a plus.
Great write.
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Re: The People of the Fading Moonlight
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:16:56 PM AEST
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This is excellent. It becons to the reader to come and join the "invisible people," whomever they are. It also reminds me of sneaking out at night when I was in high school :)
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