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Behind enemy lines
Contributed by
igba
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:00:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i labour for breath
my strenght failing me
You weigh a thousand tons
In desperation, to ditch you becomes appealing
I stagger as yet another bullet pierces
My wounds are legion as i carry you
Trails of blood on the ground as we proceed
Soaked is my uniform with ur blood
Isincerely doubt whether you will recover
Suddenly out of the forest
Renewed vigour as we approached the border
Few troops urging us frantically to hasten
Bouyed by the troops i hang on
Nearing the gates,rescue on its way
You were lifted off my shoulders
A s i collapsed on a landmine
Copyright ©
igba
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2006-01-12 09:00:58]
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Re: Behind enemy lines
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by Kamal on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:43:31 AM AEST
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Whoa I guess that theres a problem concerning people you deal with...
My motto "Two guns up" F&*% em but becareful..... becasue you might not like it...
Its like reaching the peak then someone strange walks in on you... then all that energy gets drained back to the begininning... |
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Re: Behind enemy lines
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by bernard2 on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:35:45 AM AEST
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Just one question... How old are you?
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