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Verbal expressionism
Contributed by
kamal
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:06:18 AM in AEST
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Expressionism starts with mom & dad then continues with boy or girl,
After they experience the economic foundations of the world,
Many challenges can cause an expression
It normally starts when were adolescence
As soon as were told whats good & whats not, then our minds begin to plot,
Its like the expression of someone who left the meat out to rot,
or the first time you were harassed by a cop,
Our minds can work against us when we allow our negative expression to conquer our obedience
Why bother, allow life to live then one day youll find a creative way to give
Off expression, people can learn from
Expression never ends,
it just starts a new trend,
everyones expression is divine because
It comes from within,
Unfortunately not everyone lives there lives without sin,
So dont be shocked to see expressionism from a child of the ghetto,
or someone who was raised by heavy metal,
or maybe by a ballerina who loves to step to scent of rose petals,
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kamal
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Re: Verbal expressionism
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 11:13:11 AM AEST
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| Love the images you created with this one.. it didnt really seem to have an ending and yet it was awesome and unique in that way cuz it lets the reader think more about it and thats a very good thing! Love it :D |
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Re: Verbal expressionism
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 02:28:15 PM AEST
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Interesting write...."Food for thought"
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Re: Verbal expressionism
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 04:09:09 PM AEST
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This write should make the reader ponder. We are born with our personalities. Yes, our environment can sway us to an extent, but I have found through life and living that the strong can overcome bad beginnings just as the weak can stray even though they had the best of everything. It is our soul, heart and mind that help us decide what we want from life and to strive for it. It it does not work out the way we want, then we pray, and find an alternative route to try to attain it. We must never give up in striving towards a good life for ourselves and the ones we love. If you have faith and hope, you can accomplish anything. Nice write.
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