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A Feeble Attempt
Contributed by
desolated_denial
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 12:52:36 PM in AEST
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I am not what you believe,
I'm not a liar,
I'm just a thief
I am just the answer that you love
I'm not an exit
I'm just above
I'm not your escape from pain,
I'm not the one that you substain,
I'm not the one that you would try,
I'm just another worthless lie
I was never your bible page,
I'm not sane,
I'm just made
I am just the ring that doesn't fit,
Show me off
Then let me rip
I am not your source aggrevation,
I am not the bearer of affiliation
I am not your little doll
I am just here to watch you fall
Lie to me,
No mind here
Look down on me,
I'm just too small,
What's in your mind, dear
I just wanted to know ...
... I just wanted to know something
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2006-01-12 12:52:36]
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Re: A Feeble Attempt
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:24:43 PM AEST
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sure have the voices going on in this poem.. is someone else answering, in second stanza.. because in first stanza, says not a liar, just a thief, then in second stanza says just another worthless lie.
enjoyed the poem, keep writing.. RL |
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Re: A Feeble Attempt
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by ebooibo on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:54:26 PM AEST
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| this is deep do u have more |
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