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So I Can Spit In Your Face
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 02:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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**** you all who never said
I was something to believe in
And take your condemnation with you
When you decide youre leaving
Ive had enough of talk and sex
Enough to last a lifetime
Ive had enough of the bitter tests
Provoking me to crime
Leave my hands wrapped in guilt
For ending your dishonesty
Im sick to death of how Ive felt
Im ending you honestly
**** you all who never said
I was something to dream in
And take your proud ignorant eyes
Shut them when youre leaving
Because believe me
I believe in your dishonesty
And wrapped in guilt
Ill honestly
End the bitter tests and crime
Open your blind eyes just one time
So I can spit in your face
**** you all
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2006-01-12 14:07:26]
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Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:34:19 PM AEST
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| wow you sound like me lol great write and yea **** them all
Comment edited due to the use of a banned word. Please refrain from using language like this in comments and in poems, and especially not on a poem which has already been edited for language! - Moderator_16 |
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Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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| awesome! i take back what i said in my previous comment. hehe, very well done. how i love your poems! |
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Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:12:46 PM AEST
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It's a viscious tongue lashing if i ever heard
one... it's great to write a piece that tells
exactly what you feel without the paint and
polish.
"So i can spit in your face"
it's raw, brutal and honest...
keep it up |
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Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 12:25:37 PM AEST
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Your defiant streak is definitely alive and kicking.That's certainly telling them,In your own inimitable way.I've read many of your poems today,they are all quality writes.I particularly liked 'The Remains Of Us'.
A page to remember,
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