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blue writing
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 07:11:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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I cant,
but for you my eyelids droop.
And fingers tap,
a dance of exhausted dedication.
Nevermind Red when youre around.
(Why at two thirty in the morning?)
Shoosh.
I kill people until they splat with red fleshchunks.
(In computerhead and fourpseakers surround,
A booming behind me is in front and inside my head.)
Its all a matter of fact.
A flower dripping from shining blood
drops to be stepped upon
but not crushed; its in my fingers now.
Switch sides.
(Its very Hard.)
Im looking for a place for you.
Did you know, and so, for these floors or whatever whenever,
To lay with you or on or in you whatever
way whenever?
Its all to hold and touch you with soft fingertips.
Green eyes of jade or jaded
will never gaze upon you like I do.
A child at a concrete construction
site stares
like I do every day passing by in boots I cant help
but think of how their soles are wearing out
with every step; I still look up
every once in a while.
You know, I know
It doesnt matter how much
Ive had or how Im wrecked or destroyed,
like Zero Hour, it affected me more then I knew
to be gaping years later, it was
The thought of a cold cold nuclear winter
Identical but Dead.
I still love you longer then you may believe
possible.
So dont worry
and Dont say sorry.
Its blue writing and I cant get any sleep
because of you you insufferable
ghostly disease hurt me with your love
An aching that I can not bear
to be without.
[2006-01-12 03:05:01]
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2006-01-12 19:11:58]
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Re: blue writing
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 01:49:08 AM AEST
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I am trying to say something other than the
usual and generic "awesome write!" or "great
write!", but uh yeah I absolutely love this and
the imagery was splendiferous and just left
me aching for the pain expressed within
these lines. Amazing as always...
Bobo (Joel) |
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