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A Promise.
Contributed by
OzChick
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 08:48:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On this day I give you my heart
My body, my love, my soul
All of me, completely
Holding nothing back
The best of me
The worst of me
But always me
Never false or untrue
All I ask of you
Is that you accept me
As I accept you
With your faults
And your virtues
Trusting in your surety
And in our loves purity
Until my heart stops beating
And I take my last breath
I promise you this.
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OzChick
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2006-01-12 20:48:43]
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Re: A Promise.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:15:15 PM AEST
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this is more than a simple master peice of poetic craftsmanship, no it's more like a genuine peice of reality that i hope works 4 u
such lovely writting your style is most captivating, quite an expeirence of the heart.
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Re: A Promise.
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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honestly beautiful
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Re: A Promise.
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 01:41:42 AM AEST
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| Your making me cry here, Jenny. This is so pure and beautiful. Love it. Peace, Laura |
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Re: A Promise.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 12:27:59 AM AEST
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This would have also been an excellent wedding vow.
Tim |
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