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Jungle Sweep
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:18:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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She heard legends
Knew them well
About a man who lived
Where animals dwell
They told of his prowess
Muscular and lean
She decided such majesty
Must personally be seen
Deep into the jungle
On safari she went
Daringly after dark
She followed a sweet scent
There he was showering
Under a waterfall
Adonis in ebony
Baring it all
He saw her
And off he took
Soon a black panther
Had her in his look
Eyes emeralds
Under the moon
Moments passed
Morning came soon
She found herself
Nestled with this big cat
Wondering how
She got where she was at
Then he rose
Stretching to the sky
Would she get away?
Or is this how she would die?
As suddenly as he
A panther had become
There was this man
Striking her numb
Then into his arms
He swept her away
And with this animal
She decided to stay
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NoSaint
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Re: Jungle Sweep
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 11:02:06 PM AEST
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Shari you have the amazin ability to produce an outstanding write time and time again. Each one of ur writes is a magical masterpiece. You definately know how to captivate ur reader from start to finish. Well done and keep penning.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Jungle Sweep
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by bernard2 on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 09:45:23 AM AEST
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| What a lovely story in poem form I thoroughly enjoyed my read more please in this vene.bernard2 |
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Re: Jungle Sweep
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 04:17:31 PM AEST
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Oh Shari how I wish Norm could read this one. He just loved your waterfall romantic writes! Really turned him on as he always said!*smiles*
I love them too........and this one reminded me of the waterfall sexy one too!
Wonderful.........
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Jungle Sweep
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 11:02:46 PM AEST
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| smiles, beautiful, nice visuals, an aha! poem. lovely write .. raquelLeah. |
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