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Never Be The Same
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 03:50:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Her family is gone
there is no more
the cold makes her shudder
It chills her to her core
She aches and aches
But shows no pain
She screams and yells
She acts insane
She fights to exist
All alone in this world
It's so cold and heartless
but she holds her own
When they were burned
she shed no tears
She just kept on fighting
Has wisdom beyond her years
How could a child
Once so gentle and kind
Be turned into a cold, miserable being
Bitter and angry at the world
Why did fate
Take everything away
With a flaming execution
The world seemed to burn that day
But all turned to ice
and everything freezes away
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flamingblade
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2006-01-13 15:50:10]
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Re: Never Be The Same
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 05:21:24 PM AEST
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i really like it and can connect, but maybe you should divide it into stanzas or somthing if you ever want to make it seem longer. keep writing
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