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Lost
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:58:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Look into my eyes
Can't you see I want to die
Look deeper still
There's a hole in my soul noone can fill
It sucks me in and I fall down
I look upon a face once smiling now a frown
Crazy people are crazy only because thier thoughts are saner than most
I exist only in my memories, fading like a ghost
The emotional backlash is too much for me
As the world freezes over, it makes it hard to see
I gained the world to lose my soul
Watching as the ebony chill of night unfolds
The darkness takes me to a place I know
My life plays like a re-run show
Too stubborn to give in, surrounded by my sin
I refuse my life, my friends and kin
So this is how I live on and on
My body too ignorant to die
My spirirt too heavy to fly
My mind making everything real and denouncing reality's shade
So hold me tight for I'm afraid sooner or later I'm bound to fade
I'm lost somewhere in myself and need to be found
So find me somehow, just do it quick before I'm put under a mound
Copyright ©
TundraHydra
... [
2003-01-26 05:58:05]
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Re: Lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:25:06 PM AEST
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| Wow...I know exactly how that feels...VERY good write...Luv, Fee |
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Re: Lost
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by Dreamer18 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:19:30 AM AEST
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| Hey. This is a good poem. I know how you feel. I've been there so many times i can't count. I dont think that I even want to...Theres always a way through it though. Dont give up on life because there are people who love you. And you have got an awesome talent...dont waste it. |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:19:37 AM AEST
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| Hey. This is a good poem. I know how you feel. I've been there so many times i can't count. I dont think that I even want to...Theres always a way through it though. Dont give up on life because there are people who love you. And you have got an awesome talent...dont waste it. |
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